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story attempt # 2.5

Wed Sep 30, 2009, 11:05 PM
Massive spoiler alert. This is where i do my thinking so deal with it.



Alright, this has a somewhat similar premise to AoW with a different story and set up. Basically it starts off with angels coming to earth and taking away those who are pure of heart. Sadly, so few of these people remain in the world that the disappearances are hardly commented upon. This is the beginning of so called Judgment Day, where the pure of soul are taken to heaven. After this, demons start to enter the world and kill people in secret, starting massive wars and weakening humanity beforehand. Main Char is one of these demons. At the end of the first book massive Gates to Hell open at the North and South Poles, armies of demons marching through.

Second Book. Main character continues to fight secretly, working alone more often than not. He is basically a secret agent demon. He may work directly with other demons, but I want to focus mainly on him. This book will be about the war on Humanity, and at the end we will be extinct.

Third Book: Demonic Army attacks Heaven itself. Basically it is slowly winning due to overwhelming numbers, but they will lose in the end. Sylviidae will have been manipulating the main char the entire time, making him think that he would rise to command the army if he did as she wished. In the end it backfires, he is stronger than she thought and actually manages to kill the General, and then her. This somehow disrupts the attack and causes the Demons to be slaughtered, weakening Satan almost fatally. End of the book will be about two people, Adam and Eve, in a garden that had somehow been spared the Apocalyptic war.

Major Characters:
Main Character: Geist
-An evil demon who is something of a scout or assassin for the Demonic Army. Cruel, cold and calculating where most demons are bloodthirsty and lack control.

Main Human: Acacia Bane
-Some kind of agent who is trying to connect the disappearances and the following murders. Advances to anti demon intelligence after war starts. Falls in love with Geist, ends up betraying her own ppl to him. This allows him to rise through the ranks, being much more successful than his brothers. Geist acts like he loves her back, and then betrays her, killing her to end book 2. Throughout the series, she prays to God. It is these prayers that lead her to Geist and she feels God wants her to fall in love with him. She also obeys him for this reason, and Geist gains strange power from performing certain actions throughout the series. God does this so he as the power to kill Sylviidae and end the war.

Army General: Oriax Carrion
-Demon Lord who is extremely powerful and ruthless. Only makes an appearance in the last book, when he is killed.

High Concubine: Sylviidae Mallai
-Is favored concubine of Oriax. Uses Geist to try and gain control of the Demonic Army. Manipulates him throughout to get him to try and kill Oriax, and when he is weakened she will kill Oriax herself and take his place.

Lute Philyra:
-servant to Oriax. he basically handles any mundane task deemed too petty for the general to handle.

Cielia Aliel:
-Servant to Sylviidae. She handles her personal tasks and ends up accompanying Geist at some point.


Cycle Plot: The main premise of the book is that the evil qualities of evil people can cause them to do good, an inverse of how it usually works. Also, at the beginning it shows how corrupt humanity is now by how few are taken by the angels. At the end of the series all the demons are dead, Satan is killed, and Heaven is at peace. Two humans appear in a garden on Earth, Eden. They are named Adam and Eve, and the whole point is that this is a cycle. After each Great War humanity is gone, the earth is empty, and Hell has been destroyed. Adam and Eve start Humanity again, Lucifer or another like him fall, and the cycle starts anew.

  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: Bat Country- Avenged Sevenfold
  • Reading: nothing
  • Watching: a blank white wall (inspiring huh?)
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: STARVING
  • Drinking: nothing

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:iconrandolfo:
Really thanks for the watch!! ^^

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:iconeternnull:
No problem lol :D Thanks for giving me something to watch. Saw the Cult of Shadows pic and added it to my favorites so thats what caught my eye.

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"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."

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:iconrandolfo:
and so... thanks for the fave too!!! :)

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"Judge not what is best by pleasure, though to Nature seeming meet"
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:iconxblackrabbitx:
Hey, I'm the sister of Tamate from the Nether.

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:iconeternnull:
cool :D whats up?

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"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."

-Buddha
:iconxblackrabbitx:
Haha, not much. I just finished a book. I'm still in my pyjamas and it's four in the afternoon. How about you?

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Batman: The hammer of justice is unisex.
:iconeternnull:
still awake, hyper as hell and its 3 in the morning. :D
So its a pretty normal day. XD

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"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."

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:iconxblackrabbitx:
Wow... I slept in until twelve tis morning, and eleven yesterday. You must drink a helluva lot of coffee

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